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This term Room 22 have been learning to add details to our writing by stretching a sentence. We can do this by adding adjectives, verbs, adverbs, smiles and metaphors. We discovered this new website call Telescopic Text.
Here is an example
We able to turn boring sentences in too a descriptive sentence you click on a word and it stretch out like a telescope here the link http://www.telescopictext.org/texts/